Equation's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Paradise of Dark Desires]

Very good

I liked it and the description you gave was very acurate to what I was thinking, check out my old song "Conclusion" I made that with a mystery film in mind :)

popraz responds:

Thanks. I checked out your song and left a review too.

[Edge of Faith]

Fantastic

Really good structure and synths, what program are you using for the Choir and "Woman Vocal" part?

[Sweet Angel (Edit)]

Very nice

I like this song, very uplifting, I'm a big fan of trance and you can tell you've spent alot of time on this :) 5/5 10/10

DjXeon responds:

Cheers man!
Xeon

[.HLS. Kiss Me RMX]

FL wont have fucked up.

Not a bad track, I rairly review but I read above "don't zerobomb just cause FL fucked up" It didn't, I use FL and im right in saying that sounds very much like Nexus you are using (especially the beat / bass... I use the same programs) You just need to EQ it better to deliver more Bass, It sounds like you may have a "fruity limiter" in the "Master" mixer FX panel, if thats the case adjust it and look at adjusting sound levels on all the different patterns you have running.

Trust me It isn't FL thats fucked up you just have to tweak it for a while to deliver the right sound.

heartless1298 responds:

Yea I know a lot about FL too (I used Nexus for the lead and the bass), but the way it was, somehow in the beginning when I was messing around, I had it set up so that the kick and bass was very low. I did that because if I had turned it up it distorted the vocals and what not. Ah well. I still like this track XD. Thanks for the advice.

[Happy Hard Xmas]

Nice... :)

Happy christmas mate, nice little tune :)

[Love Once More]

To Below...........

This is R'n'B, It may not have the vocals but the backing track is R'n'B style you dumb fuck, you probably think it's Jungle or classical or something daft.

[Razorfish (Teck071Remix)]

Good man

Nice, I liked the initial build up it gave me fond memorys of trance from back in 1999.... Thats when music was good! And is that nexus I can sniff ;) Just downloaded 3 new expansions for it... Hope to hear more from you.

[Kazmo & Lira - Still Alive RMX]

Nice

Good job mate, this is my kind of trance, very laid back eith a beutiful tune, EQ / mastering is a high point although I think the EQ of the vocals is slightly to much towards the high end (only ever so slightly) By the by where can IU find them vocals and a midi for this song? I'd love to make a version myself :)

[elucid promo - Diversity]

You make this but you think you can slate my song?

You call me an amature and say my song is "unoriginal" yet you upload this boring unoriginal track that feels empty?

For starters the track I uploaded was different samples of a project I'm working on (hence what I put in the authors comments)

I was expecting you're track to be breathtaking after the awful review you wrote me (like you was some sort of fuckin god).... But infact your song is awful and did I mention incredably boring!

But that could just be my opinion, but then again with no other reviews and a song score of 1.44 / 5.00 maybe It's not just my opinion.

Don't mean to be harsh but this is the type of critisism you need to make you better Amature.

"You may not use this track for commercial purposes without my express written permission" - How geeky... and don't worry I dont think anyone will.

elucid responds:

Alright - seems someone can't take criticism. Firstly, look at the date of this track. Well over a year old. Infact, I wrote this in 2006, so I've come a long way since then.

I respect your opinion, however incorrect it may be.

I gave constructive criticism - you haven't even stated WHAT is wrong, just gave broad subjective statements - without any evidence to support it.

As shit as this submission of mine is I'll lay out what it has over your attempt:

A clear set genre (hard trance).
An arrangement that is consistant and flows correctly.
An ORIGINAL composition.
Clearly defined sections - introduction, breakdown, build up, main melody, break and outro.

And the list goes on.

So, in all actual reason, your response is just a childish backlash from someone who doesn't like to hear the truth - if you want to get your arse kissed, try putting something out that's worth listening to. Don't expect a pat on the back for a poor effort.

Answer this question - how long have you been writing/producing music?

[Bring on the Hardstyle!!!]

EQ :*(

Its good for a Hardstyle song, it has an underground feel ito it...

But I could obly give 7/10 due to the lack of EQ / mastering.
When all the synths / beat was going together there was too much distort due to them not being individualy EQ'd

If you eq the song it will sound a lot more polished.

Overall not a bad song tho.

grandman1023 responds:

but i did eq the shit out of it :( ...hope you know wat your talking about...fyi the distortion is there for the hardstyle part but wat ever...thanx for the reviews i like reviews